Over the weekend, did more pages of my Graphic Novel. Pages 11 - 13.
- Did another drawing of Granddad and Hal's body for page 13 of Chapter 2.
- Day started 9:30am.
- Had a bit of mix-up. Our Term 1 Timetable mentioned a group tutorial for Professional Practice but there was no sign of it happening. There was a sign up one to one tutorial, but I already did that.
- Did page 14 of Chapter 2.
- I showed my work so far to a friend and he advised that the pages 7 and 8 can be done in another way. I agreed as I felt they weren't showing the story clearly. He showed me a different way of showing movement too, which has helped a lot.
- I ditched the idea of double page spread and got rid of the bin and added a close up verion of Hal and broke his speech in to two.
- Page 8 was split into two. One page Hal throwing cup in bin. Another page close up of cup falling towards bin.
- Altered the title of the book with subheading.
Day ended 4pm.
- Printed pages so far for another Group Crit tomorrow. The only problem was that the ink was running out and the pictures didn't look completed, but couldn't do anything about it.
Tuesday 6th December 2011
- Day started 10am.
- Was dreading Group Crit today. My work was presented second after another girl showed her progess on an educational/interactive book for KS1 kids. Pretty interesting and the only work that fascinated me, probably because our aim is at children, mine being a bit older.
- I was surprised with the feedback of my work as I didn't get much of a criticism! Jo Newman mentioned that one of the pages looked effective with the ink running out. She said it's a good way of showing something fading away, and I liked that idea!
- After lunch, continued with book, altering a few things.
- Day ended 3:45pm.
Thursday 8th December 2011 (My Last Day of Term!)
- Day started 9:30am.
Simply carried on with book. Pages15 and 16 of Chapter 2.
- Day ended 4pm.
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